七.下列為一篇高中生作文。請將原文中的錯誤改正,並潤飾、擴寫為一篇適合在英文 作文課觀摩之範文。20%。 Helen is working mother. His busy day not ending when she leave office, however, it just begin. After yesterday work, she pick up children at school. Than, droped her son, Peter, down at home and driving daughter, Nancy, in piano lesson. When nancy is at piano lesson, she go to super market. Before she go home, she picks she up.
When she get home, she prepares dinner and help children doing homework. His hasband last night work very late. When he gets home, he eat dinner and Helen reads the children story. After that she take shower and watched news from TV. Final, she go to bed after she spend some time to talk hasband. What busy day for Helen.