13 In that conflagration which wiped out our house and more than 500 others, I sat in a car watching the fire pick
apart my bedroom, our living room, all my past, present, and my future.
(A)From a car, I watched the great tide wash away over 500 houses, ours included; every part of the house was
torn down, leaving nothing to start with.
(B)The sight of our house and 500 others appeared in the distance, creating a grand view which can be reflected
throughout my life.
(C)Everything in my life went with the fire that burnt down our house and over 500 others, as I watched the scene
from a car.
(D)With no hope at all for reconstruction, I sat in my car watching the storm rip off my house and 500 others.
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