申論題

VI. The following is a student’s composition on the college entrance exam. Please correct it, score it, and give some comments. (5%) 題目: 如果你可以不用擔心預算，隨心所欲的度過一天，你會怎麼過？請寫一篇短文，第一段說明你 會邀請誰和你一起度過這一天？為什麼？第二段描述你會去哪裡？為什麼？ I finally decide to choose my best friends to come with me and star the crazy day. Because of them, I can feel more freedom, without them, I just like a fish out of water. Therefore, we will try those which we have never experienced and never done. Although shopping is not the tea in my cup, I will can buy any luxury to our contentment. I think the first station will be the Tokyo where is the most prosperous in Japan. We eat the located delicacy and soak in the hot spring which is said that is good for skin. Second station will be Franch where the art and buildings are full of classicism. When it comes to Franch, no one won’t think up the fashionable clothes. We will buy a lot of clothes which are showed by models. Finally station will be home, because it is the warmest place which can’t be replace. And we enjoy sleeping in our own beds.