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If you have financial problems, there are many different ways to save your money. Instead of spending money on new clothes, you can try to buy some second-hand goods at a charity store where you can find many fashionable bargains. Eating out is also a big expense, so you can choose cooking with a few friends which is cheap and fun. Taking buses and taxis also cost you money, so it is worth buying a cheap bicycle to commute.

You can choose cooking with a few friends which is cheap and fun. 

cooking with a few friends和一些好朋友一起主食（這件事）便宜且有趣。

Taking buses and taxis also cost you money, so it is worth buying a cheap bicycle to commute.

從文義判斷，這裡的代步應該是指通勤（用以代替搭公車和計程車）。

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If you have any money problems. Have a lot of way can save money. Don\'t spend money buy new clothes, can buy second hand clothes. You can find fashion and cheaper items in there. And if you eat outside also will spend a lot of money. You can try to cook with your friends can save money and enjoy the fun. Bus and text also spend money, can buy a cheap bicycle go anywhere.

If you have money problems, there are many different ways to save money. Instead of spending money on new clothes and trying to buy second-hand goods at a charity store, there you will find a lot of fashionable and inexpensive products. Dining out is also a big expense. You can cook with a few friends, which is cheap and fun. Buses and taxis will also spend money, so it is worth buying an inexpensive bicycle to ride instead of walk.

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cheap因有品質低劣含義所以使用inexpensive（單指價格低廉）
ride instead of walk 代步工具不知道可否單用travel來代替（travelscoot代步車）
fun有趣的 funny 逗趣好笑的

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